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Hello Mr,Jack

I received your fax this wednesday.Thanks for the fax.I ask your request to the
BHT480 device cost and delivery time.They cost $150.00 per hundred.Delivery
takes 1 weeks.If you have any problems or questions, please let me know.

Best regard,

Kazunari A*******

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**********Your Message with My Changes**********

Hello Jack,

I received your fax on Wednesday. Thanks for the fax. Regarding your request
for the BHT480 device cost and delivery time, they cost $150.00 per hundred. 
Delivery takes 1 week. If you have any problems or questions, please let me know.

Best regards,

Kazunari A********

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See you in class,

John